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i done this story its the only way i could get it out there so i hope you all like it leave comments because it s such a big thing because this was my idea so let me know what you think also scrible back on this or go on bebo here is my name for that davidj790 i've also got msn stormdj15@hotmail.com  hope you like it. its inportent you tel me what you think if i should get it published

OVERVIEW Reflection on the story

It’s hard to believe my story if I told you, you would not believe me how much work I put in, how much struggle I put into combat and how many friends I had or to say lost, all because of one man,

He was Iron Curse. I lost my family and my friends to him but I got him---or did I, I cannot quite remember.

Let me take you back to a time before I learned about my future, I was a wee lad and did not know very much about my family’s past.

I met Thor who was a kind man who allowed me to stay with him.

It was then he told me about a brother and sister they were called Rosella and Theo.

Rosella and Theo were prodigies of Thor they had already been on the journey I was about to embark on, and would me there to guide and lead me to my destination.

MY JOURNEY

It was a stormy night the night I reached my destiny with my grandfather, but we never considered that one of us might not make it through and as a small boy should have to continue on my own. as previously stated the worst happened and I found myself alone disorientated and scared. No parents, no grandfather and no chance of making it to my destination or so I thought, then I got to Thor’s home and the past got left behind and my future was about to begin.

Chapter 1

Toms beginning

Our story begins when our young hero was travelling to meet someone he was a young boy. He had to go to this person in the far west and he spotted a cabin along side the riverbank. He then ran to it because it was starting to rain and it was thunder then he knocked the door the man said “come in” he came in trembling the young boy said in a quivering voice “thank you very much” the man said “ you should not be out all by yourself in the late hours. What’s your name boy” the man looked curious. Then the young boy said still quivering from the cold “ its erm… its tom yes my names tom” the man said to the young boy “ well my name is Thor so tell me how you’re out here with no mum and dad then tom”. The boy took a long pause and then he began his story. Then thorn  said, “ Start where you remember from your journey”. Tom started to tell all about when his mum and dad died “ well my story began’s when my grandpa told me about this secret place up on the west coast where this school for martial arts are he said they can train you to become strong and more powerful than you can be. Thorn cut across “ Now wait one cotton picking minute are you telling me the truth boy. Then tom spoke “ yes I am I am telling you the truth it’s a true story” thor was a bit concerned that his grandpa thought that his only grand son would not be taken in by all the rubbish but he was wrong. “Very well tell me everything since your mum died” tom resumed his conversation.

The story of his parents

As thorn and tom sat in a nicely cabin with the fire burning tom resumed his conversion. “Well it was like is my mum died when I was only 4. I went to my mums funeral there I saw my grandpa he told me about one boy in his life will rise up to take a stand Thor cut across again “ is your grandpa of his head” tom looked up in shock. “ If you don’t stop telling me how my story should stand out I am just not going to tell you and walk out” tom was getting impatient Thor said sadly “ very well tom please continue “.

Tom said to Thor “ thank you Thor now we left when I was telling you about what my grandpa was saying but when my dad died a few weeks after my mum died my grandpa was at the funeral he said and I remember it well he said since your mum and dad died you can come and live with me, so I went to live with my grandpa shortly when we where in the car going back to my place I was looking out the window thinking how much I lost and what there was to be gained when my grandpa said what’s wrong boy I said. “I am just sad” well let me take you back when I was a little lad my dad told me about a martial arts up in the west end and he took me to that school for gifted children he said this is where I was brought up when my mum and dad died then they said if ever my grandsons mum and dad did before I did. I was to take my grandson up to the far west to get trained up by these martial arts teachers. Then a storm broke out I think that was where my grandpa was taking me so we where in a hill my door was in the side of the cliff then I saw thunder up ahead then. I was shouting at my grandpa to stop he didn’t I jumped out the car as soon as the car turned the corner and I did not see my grandpa make it the car zoomed out the edge of the cliff and resumed its falling falling in to nothing-ness. Then the car was gone in the water there was air bubbles coming up for a minute or two but he did not make it up to the surfes that’s when I continued up the winding path alone that’s what brought me up to your cabin to take shelter and continued when the rain dies down hope that’s ok”. Thor looked at him for a moment and said, “ Well you would just have to stay the night till your strength comes up won’t you”. Tom looked happy like he had a huge party his inside filled up then Thor said “ would you like some toast” tom said “ yes please Thor that would be lovely” tom looked at him for a moment and said “your not the first boy to come to my cabin in search of the martial arts teacher. Thor gazed out the window. The tail of the other boy and sister

Thor was looking out the window in disbelief then tom cut across the silence “ Thor “ tom said looking over “Thor tell me what happened to the other boy that came to your cabin please Thor”. Thor was still looking out the window he took a deep breath and said “ very well tom I’ll tell you who was the two people to come across to my cabin In search of the martial arts up in the west end”. Tom was gazing in to Thor blue eyes. Thor said slowly “ ill tell you a bout a boy and a girl just about your age they where about 9 and 10 the girl was 9 and the brother would be about 10 they are older now mind you but I don’t know if they made it to the martial arts school. As tom looked in to Thor eyes tom said, “ did they have names?” Thor was thinking is this boy off his head Thor spoke “ yes the girl was called Rosella and the boy was called Theo. They came to my cabin a couple of weeks ago very much like you did but they said that they heard that same story from a guru any way they said the same thing they said the guru was going to take them to that speechless place up in the west end to train up to fight this bad person for some reason they did not give me his name but they said the guru trusted them to go on the journey to find the martial arts class get strong and come back to fight this evil I thought at first it was a lot of rubbish but now you stop and think about it they are always good and bad in the world what happens is the path that we choose if we choose the right path we will go far if we choose the wrong  path well be in a spiral going in to deep dark till our hearts are complete covered with darkens all that matters is the path you choose remember that if you face evil you remember that inside  a bad person tries to take that away from you if you do remember that you will go very far  and when the time comes you can face up and stand in what you went for. Tom was still gazed with happens and destroy he thought to himself tom thinking, “if these Rosella and Theo would find the place they would return but in the other hand they might not”. Then tom spoke “Thor” Thor was looking out the window Thor regained his thoughts and said “ what” tom said “is it true did they make it did they ever come back” Thor was crying at this point “no they never they never came back they went the next day and did not return” there was silence the rain was pounding of the roof then the door was knocked then Thor said “ who is there” he reached a shot gun the other side said “ IT’S ROSELLA AND THEO” they said it over the high winds howling and howling Thor and tom both turned in complete shock then Thor said have you two ever been this way before they said together in a loud pinched voice “ YES BUT WE WHERE NINE AND TEN” Thor looked at tom in surprise and said “ come in” they came in and Thor rushed them to the nearest bed to sit on.

The story of Rosella and Theo

As Thor rushed Theo and Rosella they where out of berth and really skinny they haven’t eat in days because they where all ways on the move Thor cut across the silence “ did you make it to where you where to go then did you get the training Theo and Rosella said together “ yes “ toms head turned around “ did you did you really make it “ Theo looked at tom but his sister only had eyes for Thor Theo said “yes I did so did my sister but who are you I did not see you the last time we where at Thor house”  tom was looking and thinking about the place so it is real so its not a lie and they have been to it and they found it. Then Theo said to tom “ hello what is your name” tom was brought back down to earth and said tom “ and where you have been that’s where I am on my way to I stopped at Thor house to get some rest and to go tomorrow to the west end” Theo said “ how do you want to go up there for the martial class is up over that huge mountain” tom said “your joking me” Theo gazed down at him said “ nope it’s over the hill over there he pointed out the window and said to him me and my sis can take you over there so you can find it quicker so we can we have only been going to it over twenty five years so we have” tom and Thor looked at each other so that means they both thought then they said “you are 35 and your sister is 34” yes” as the time ticked on Rosella and Theo was telling them about the training that you can take “but it takes twenty five years to make it” Tom said in an power full voice “I don’t care I want to learn become strong rise to the challenge” Theo looked at his sister Rosella and said “ what do you recon should we take him he wants to go after all look at his face” Rosella looked and said “very well but as soon as we get him there and talked to your master then we have to go back for our mission, The martial arts class As dawn brook over the sky all four of them was sleeping to about twelve o’clock then they got up. Tom was first Thor was second then Rosella was  third and Theo was last they had something to eat then Theo said to tom “tom so do you think you are ready to go today” tom looked back and said “yes I have been ready ever since my mum dad and grandpa died”. Thor looked over and shook his head to warn him not to ask how they died so Theo did not ask as they where heading to the door Thor said “ you two wait out side I want to a talk with Theo for a minute”. They obeyed then Theo said “ what do you want” Thor opened his mouth and said “ well it’s like this I want tom to be safe his grandpa died the second tom came two my cabin you and your sister were sent as a quest to come back to fight the evil but he was not before his grandpa died he said to tom when my mum and dad where still a live they told me if my grandson mum and died before I did I was to take there only grandson to the school where you are taking him now his grandpa died before they got there I knew since they where going in this direction his grandpa was taking him there without telling him but his grandpa died after he said that tom jumped out continued on foot and landed on my door step then you two came he is leaving now you and your sister are going too and leaving me again and I was worried  whether you two would make it or not night after night I was counting the days I just told him the story about you two thinking you would never turn up again then you just appeared  now you are going away again well this time I am coming with you and you cant stop me or ill take the boy and say flatly you cant go” Theo was shocked and tears where going down both Theo and Thor cheeks then they went to hug each other and Theo said “ ok you can come I am sorry for the pain we didn’t think you would mind us going for so long” they broke apart. Thor cleared his throat and said “very well let me get my keys then we will all go”. Thor packed everything food water blankets and spare clothes then the set off. Three whole night’s it took them they finely arrived ever one was flying in mid air and fighting high and over the sky then two men came to the door then said “what you two doing back” they looked at each other and turned back and said “ sorry we came back but this young boy would like to train at this school his names tom he’s five years old and he as not got nobody to go to all his family are gone”. The two men looked at the boy said, “ Do you really want to come to this school” tom looked at them for a moment and said “yes I would love to go to your school” two men said “very well you will have twenty five years if you complete you training then you will be giving a place here come you “ 2 man “ you three go away”. Thor Theo and Rosella looked at it then walked on Thor walked back to his cabin and the brother and sister went to their town. End of chapter 1

Chapter two Pushing it to your limit

Five years have passed since Theo Rosslea and Thorn took tom to the school. Class was starting “Right people today we are going to practice with self balance tom step this way please” Tom looked around the class hoping some one else would step up in his place “tom I am waiting” tom looked around then said “yes” then his Teacher said “today class tom’s going to show us how to slow down time so he can dodge the bright fire ball’s young Barry here is going to be the one who’s throwing them and young tom is trying to dodge them when I count to three you are going to start ok here we go one two tom was ready for what ever came out of Barry’s hand then the teacher said THREE” as soon as she said three Barry was fast with the fire balls then the teacher said “come on tom remember the flying lessons we did last term use them as an edge now Barry try again this time wait till toms off the ground”. Tom kicked of his feet where floating in mid air then the teacher said once more “three two one GO” tom moved left right up down avoiding all the shots but he did not see what he was about to do next as the fire ball came hurling towards him he done a spin then he said “ ice ball” the ice ball collided with the fire ball and went straight down and smashed the ground five years they taught tom and that was the first time he ever use the ice move before. The teacher cut in “well that’s all today class dismissed except for you tom and Barry I want to talk to you both”. Every one packed there back’s and headed out side for break the teacher said “in all my life as a teacher I have never seen two students that have progressed as much as you to” Barry and tom looked at each other and said together “we only want to make you happy we came here on the same day with the same goals I think destiny brought us together now five years have passed we have got to know each other very well and we also know what you as teachers would expect from us” the teacher looked down on them and said “ you two have no one to go to I have watched you two since you came that’s how I put you in the same class because your powers are more advance then the others you can move on to the more experience tests and if I arrange for you to be partners you will be better then every one here so what do you say it’s hard to believe that you are now ten both your birthdays are coming up soon ill get you both something ok”. Tom and Barry looked at each other teacher cut in” now off you go and enjoy what is left of break plenty more class to go to. Tom and Barry went out side there was this little girl waiting for them across the landing Barry said to tom “o tom she’s here” tom said “yes I can see her Barry you know I am not blind after all” Barry laughed the girl came over she said “hi Barry hi tom how are you”. They looked at each other and they looked back at here and said together “hi Katie how are you” Katie said, “fine can I walk with you two please?” they said “ok”. As they walked down she said “you two where great” tom and Barry looked at each other and said together to Katie “we don’t know what you’re talking about Katie” she looked at them together and said “ I think you two know perfectly what I’m talking about” the two boys looked at here and tom said “ no really tell us what you are talking about because we really don’t know” she eyed  them up and said “ok ill tell you. You two are the most powerful in the class they gave a smirk and an other thing how do you have an ability to shoot out ice any way” tom said “ where there’s a will there’s away” Katie looked all puzzled and said “ what the hell that supposed to mean” they walked on tom and Barry escaped because they went in to the boy’s bath room tom said “do you think she knows Barry concluded was she must know how do you explain to every one in our year that we are going in to higher” in one of the toilets there was this mean boy called Jack was a trouble maker we was in a group called the dark angels yes the dark angels where a nasty group there powers where dark they used clouds as weapons with a lot of different abilities the dark angles where run by Jack he was the same year as them. As tom and Barry came out of the toilet Katie was still there she ran up and said “ I had to come back you see I felt a dark presence in the boys toilets then tom said “drat it must have been that jack he’s always snooping about” as soon as the three turned around jack he said “ well hello you two aren’t you a sight for sore eyes” tom said “why don’t you get lost and leave as alone you git” has tom was getting madder he pulled out his hands from his pockets and then put clouds in the air then said come out boy’s three boys bigger than Katie Barry and tom said “hello jack how are you jack said I am fine but we have a problem What problem these three are getting on the beating list as a cloud rose in to the air Katie’s hand where all light up then by powers of the dark clouds she then said “ bye the powers of light destroy the dark clouds” as she said that she got a thunder bolt and hurled it in to the clouds then as she did that Jack become stronger then said “ ha ha ha” turned that could around then said once more “GO” .The cloud with the thunder bolt of Katie she flew back got her head hit of a pillar  she smashed down hard on the ground tom and Barry flew up in the air and said together  “you should not have done that” jack was happy and said “come on then boys” tom and Harry formed force conjured up a fire ball and an ice ball so big its bound to shut that jack up the three boys who came by his side ran away jack shouted “ COME BACK YOU COWARDS”  toms ice ball Barry’s fire ball combined to make an ice fire move they launched at jack but it missed Barry and tom made it that it missed then it covered jack with fire first then with ice performing a spectacular view as jack was so scared he made a cloud jumped back in it and went away with his tail between his legs then tom said “ THAT WILL TEACH YOU  GIT” THEY just remembered what had happened tom was the first to fly over hi picked her up took her to the hospital he  told the nurse that it was jacks fault tom said “ he was teasing us we where in a mood with him then he made two clouds appear then he had three boys come out of them and then Katie’s hands had turned yellow and then she had a lighting rod in her hand then she threw it to the cloud then he was not happy that she done that then he moved the cloud forward and it knocked her over two the other side of the pillar then she fell with a bang then me and Barry preformed a large fire and ice move in to a ball we joined it together and then we made it look like we hit jack but we never we moved it up in to the air then we made it in to a show then jack was scared then he made a cloud then jumped away his group is called the dark angles. And that’s when I flew over brought Katie to you and I have told you what happened it all started because me and Barry where left behind to talk to the teacher she is planning to move us in to a higher class” she looked at him for a moment and she said “ ok very well ill have a word with the teacher and see what she would do with that jack boy he really is trouble I said it all along” tom said thank you miss” off you go young tom” tom said before he closed the door “ ill be back to see Katie when she’s up please tell me wont you” the nurse said to tom “ I will tell you dear now off you go before your late for lunch”. As tom was walking down the path to the lunch hall he saw Barry he rushed up and said “Barry wait up” he did not wait for him he should again “BARRY WAIT UP” then he thought to him self hang on there’s something not right here Barry always slows down when I’m wanting to speak to him he saw him in the queue he went in the queue and thought there is something wrong with him he would have turned around by now and said hello or something but he walked on tom skiped the queue and tom caught up with Barry then tom span Barry around .Tom said “  what’s matter with  you  are not all that crabby after all” Barry looked at tom for a moment then said “does it matter what I feel like tom” tom looked at him and said” I thought it was you and me right through school” Barry looked at him walked away  out the door then jumped into a black hole. The hole took Barry to his twin then jack laughed made a hole grabbed Barry by the scruff of the neck then disappeared to a different location sat him down then he disappeared.

Chapter 3

Kate’s fine

The nurse went to pull Barry out of class then Barry was nowhere to be seen then Tom said “ hang on I saw Barry jump in to a dark cloud” the nurse went white as a sheet said “ do you think it’s the work of the dark angels”. Tom said “of course” they both ran together as fast as they can they went straight to the head teacher. The head teacher said, “ Come in “. They came crashing through the door the head teacher was alarmed then Barry and the nurse said together “ Barry’s in great trouble the dark angels have him the head teacher cut in “the dark angels never heard of them before”. Tom was annoyed with him then said “well of course you have not heard of them before that’s how they got there name called the dark angles because all the teachers think he is nice but he treats his class mates like we are all dirt and he gets away with it but not this time”. The teacher looked at him said, “ Who’s the leader of it” tom and the nurse said together “ jack”. Jack was in the middle of a class the head teacher said “ JACK COME TO ME JACK”. Jack was teleported out the class with his hands tied behind his back then the head said,” yes we cant have that type of abusing power can we jack”. Jack said to him “ so you have found out about my little group then have you” the head teacher said “ yes I have” jack was looking out the window then said “there’s great evil out there aren’t they tom” tom was going to tell him then he said “ where’s my friend Barry jack” jack looked and laughed. “ You think I am going to tell you ill fight with the man over there if he wins then ill come quietly but if he loses the fight ill kill you’re friend before you all can find him”. As gloomy as every one the head teacher headed outside but before he did he said “tell all the teachers to teleport around the School and then hide Barry till we kick out jack for good”. The walked outside jack was the first one to make the move he said “ the power of darkness and all that s not right in the world make me strong” the head teacher would not stand for that he did not need to speak to make stuff happen he span around making a shield was ready for anything that came out of jack’s arms. Jack said “ you’re time is up”. Tom said, “ watch out sir” he dodged the first attacked rebound it the nurse then there was jack and the head the teacher and also tom. Tom said “ YOU DON’T WANT TO END IT LIKE THIS JACK” jack was only looking at the man stood before him jack said “ don’t worry tom as soon as I’m done ill move on to you” the head teacher was putting up I fight then fire ice thunder came rushing out the heads teachers hands then he said “you will not win jack”. Jack made up more clouds then put the teacher in to a seal of clouds then moved on to tom. Jack laughed then said come tom after me then” tom thought of all the trouble he caused thought about Barry a lot then out of his hand came a fire ball and and ice ball so big that it was to power full then after the shot took place jack disappeared with out a trace.

Chapter 4

Rosslea and Theo’s fight

As the brother sister were getting nearer to there chapel Theo said “ I fell two dark power’s up a head” the sister Rosslea said “I know what you mean but there is a small power of evil and a huge power to I thought you could have known that” the brother looked over at his sister and said “ yes but if anything happens to one of us contact Tom Barry and Katie we might need there help with them” Rosslea looked at Theo and said “ok” then she said “brother” Theo looked at her and said “yes sis. What happens if we fail what do we do then” Theo was thinking for a moment then said “ well I’m not sure if the worst comes to the worst we will have to get Tom and Barry and Katie to help us I heard from there head teacher that tom as the power to do two powers at once talk about progress” Rosslea looked at him and said “ progress indeed but how do you know that tom and his friends can beat this power we don’t even know the full of this power no one in 3’0000 years know it’s a legend about his power and also there’s no telling who he as scraped the bottom of the evil list and find” they reached this house big old with chime’s writhing on it. The other side of the room said Rosslea and Theo said together “ its us back let us in please” the man over the other side of the door said “ yes Right away”. As they walked over the door this man appeared then he was looking at them for a moment then said “ you two in my office NOW”. They walked over to his office then they started to talk Theo was first as always he was first to speak he said “ do you know who the other small power of evil is” there teacher said “ yes I know who exactly who is the small power it’s jack” they both looked over to one of each other and Rosslea said “ jack from tom’s class” the teacher said “ im glad to see we are on the same page” Theo said “ have we to get tom Katie and Barry in the scene” he considered it for a moment then he said “yes go back to the school tell the head teacher and also tell them who is the small power is to they all have the right to know now of you go to the school bring them back soon”.

Chapter 5 The evil power

Rosslea and Theo headed back to the school as fast as they could then they reached the school meanwhile back in a hall way tom Katie and Barry all was saying how for the past two weeks they felt a dark power and a dark power rising then the head teacher said “come with me right now you don’t need you’re thing’s “ they all looked puzzled said “but sir we did not do anything wrong we were walking down the hall way” the head said “it’s good news and bad news” they looked at each other then they walked in two the room then tom said “ Rosslea Theo what are you two doing here” Theo said as always.” Remember when you said in your letter you felt something was wrong, there is and we need your help remember when I told you about this person 3’0000 years a go there was this evil and you felt this power just as soon as you where going down the hall you felt the power like this brave warriors had the power to fell the darkness as you gathered that jack boy was evil and you where telling me about him and his dark angels and he is getting power from this evil power cant tell you the name right now or he will know we are talking about him if any of us say his name he will come before we are ready its because he has this big ears if we say his name it will come with his new workers the dark angels”, tom said he tried to kill Barry and Katie he knocked her out and he did not even harm me” Theo shook his head said that’s because you’re a descended from the fighter’s” tom find this hard to belief then said “I am”. Theo said “ you ever wondered how you where able to do lots of power s like ice thunder and fire its because you care about your friends you can learn what they know because you love them so much you cant see anything happening to them that’s horrible”. Tom said, “lets step out side far away from the school then we will shout his name out then him and jack will come to us then we don’t need to go far”. They stepped out the head teacher tom and Theo and Rosslea Katie and Barry then they all went as far away from it then they all said 	“Iron curse come to us right now” this tall person that was Magical metal and he was full of anger and rage he said well who sent me an invented to get killed then who wants to fight jack first” Rosslea stepped forward she said “ I will” they took off from the air then there where powers all shooting out of ever where then time stood still then jack said “ you’re going to die” Rosslea made a shoot and mist then jack pulled the cloud out said eat his she was shoot and then she fell right down to the ground then tom said “ NO YOU KILLD TO MANY PEPOLE NOW ITS YOURE TURN TO DIE” jack said “yes you’re right tom it’ is your turn to die” tom has now got Theo sisters powers now he will use them to kill jack all of Rosslea and Barry’s and Katie put together then tom said “ TAKE THIS JACK” jack was now  dead	then he turned to Iron curse and then Tom said “ YOU WANT ME TO KILL YOU DO YA”  	Iron curse was laughing and said “ do it then kill me”. Tom said “fine I will just do that” he used all his power in one go and said “ FOR ALL THE PEPOLE YOU KILLED ILL PAY THEM BACK BY KILLING YOU RIGHT NOW” then tom used all his power and it was 1 good aim they killed the Iron curse and jack, peace was returned to the earth and everything was back to normal or was it time will tell.

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