User talk:Str8talk4u

Hi, I saw your updates to the John Two-Hawks page. Do you have any evidence to back up the changes you've made, other than his own websites? For example, I've not been able to find anything anywhere to support "and he has shared time with Presidents, Senators and Movie Stars as a featured speaker" - which is why I didn't mention it. If you have additional info, such as specific dates and events, please post it (with links if available) on the Talk page. Also, "Two-Hawks was also the co-producer of the book" (Iktomi) - how do you know? Joe Marshall is the only author listed at Amazon. And is there some subtle difference between "Yankton Nakota (Sioux)" and "Yankton Sioux" that I don't know about?

Many of the other edits you've made seem biased toward making him sound more impressive than he actually is. Don't get me wrong, I like him too. But realistically, the only reason he's notable enough to be included in Wikipedia is because of Nightwish.

Please respond sometime in the next week or two. If I don't hear from you, I'll start changing things back.

Nerwen (talk) 08:04, 21 January 2009 (UTC)