User talk:Strathendry1927

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Hello, Onotomatic, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I notice that one of the first articles you edited appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been reverted for this very reason.

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Ooh Bunnies! Leave a message :) 11:59, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

Re: AfC
I suggest you read the information on peacock words to see what kind of language is factual and encylopedic and what kind isn't. Things like, "It enjoyed unprecedented success throughout the early 20th century" and "70 years later it is still considered by many pen connoisseurs to be one of the finest fountain pens ever made" (in fact, that second sentence is problematic in a variety of ways - "considered by many" is weasel words. Be factual. Who are these "many"? And a sentence like that can't exist in a wikipedia article without a reliable source to back it up either) are completely unsuitably worded. I also suggest taking a look at already existing articles on similar subjects to take note of how they are written. My advice is to stick to the bare facts and figures - the ones that can be backed up with reliable sources. If it's not properly sourced it won't pass review. Best of luck, and feel free to ask any other questions (although in future please leave talk page messages at the very bottom of the talk page). Ooh Bunnies! Leave a message :) 13:57, 14 March 2012 (UTC)

Your article submission Onoto


Hello Strathendry1927. It has now been over six months since you last edited your article submission, entitled Onoto.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. j⚛e deckertalk 02:45, 31 May 2013 (UTC)