User talk:Strati.mou/sandbox

Great potential edits. Use the next week to draft your actual edits and get them transferred from your sandbox. Professorcravens (talk) 21:35, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Efstratios' Peer Review - Michael Notaroberta
- The addition of the Greece far-right paragraph is good, I would just review it to make the sentences more clear (i.e 'far-right/far-left' instead of 'far right/far left', and a few other grammatical things). Otherwise it is a good paragraph and the sources that are used are good sources as well. - For the Greece paragraph, if you can, I would look into what was the response from the right wing on Pasokification. Did it lead to violence? Did Pasokification work for the left? Just an idea.

- For the paragraph that talks about far-right movements, maybe relate it to one specific country and go more specific into how the far-right movement panned out in that country? Like you did with the Greece example? Also just an idea.

Mary Beth's Peer Review
Really great addition to the article! I believe that the few sentences you added help progress the global perspective section. My only feedback would be to try to add more information and go deeper in explaining what the shifts were like for both the far-left and the far-right. Also at the end add an example or two of the aggressive stances and pulls so the reader can understand more of the situation.