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JBaumgartner Feedback: Early Childhood Education Act
I searched through both of the team members sandboxes to try to find writing about this topic and couldn't find anything information. Jj baumgartner (talk) 00:08, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Jjbaumgartner

Article Evaluation
Article: Early Childhood Education Act

Content: Under the Legislative History part of the article, I think each law passes should have a reason as to how it relates to the Early Childhood Education Act. Tone: I believe there are parts of the article that are underrepresented; therefore, the tone of the article seems somewhat biased. The article would benefit from adding more information to each section in the article. Streme2 (talk) 06:19, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Research and Evaluations
Research

The Preschool Curriculum Evaluation Research program evaluates the efficiency of current preschool curricula in order to address the lack of systematic evaluations currently used. The data collected includes child assessments, parent interviews, teacher interviews and classroom observations. Evaluations were made to commonly assess the types of assessments that preschool programs across the country were giving their children before they left and went to kindergarten. These evaluations were focused on the fact that preschools were not assessing children on a rigorous scale that efficiently prepared them to enter grade school.

What children learn and the skills they gain in Pre-Kindergarten and Kindergarten determine how well they will succeed academically in the next few years that follow. added to the article Streme2 (talk) 20:54, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

The National Institute for Early Childhood Research is an institute that concentrates on using research to support and enhance Early Childhood programs in the United States. This institute has been using research to promote a higher education for young children since 2002. They are currently doing research on several projects. added to this section Streme2 (talk) 22:02, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Evaluations

The 'Even Start Classroom Literacy Interventions and Outcomes Study is a controlled study that assesses the contribution of the enhanced parenting component of the program. It focuses on evaluating whether focused literacy instruction combined with parent education will provide better outcomes than current programs

This program was created in 1989. The focus of this program was to help the parents of low-income families in order to improve the literacy skills of their children. By increasing the parents' knowledge and skills needed for reading and writing, the literacy skills of their young children would most likely increase as well. added to article Streme2 (talk) 21:30, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

The Early Reading First National Evaluation assesses the impact of the program on children’s language, literacy outcomes and preschools’ literacy instruction. The study compares schools’ programs who received funding from the Early reading grant and those who did not.[1]

The main focus of this study was to give the children of low-income families the opportunity to gain the necessary academic skills need to succeed in school. added. Streme2 (talk) 21:30, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Autumn Smith Peer Review
Your writing looks good so far! I like that you included additional information about Head Start, as well as up-to-date sources. My only suggestion would be to make sure that all of your links work before publishing. You have "Jule sugarman" and "Template: Early Childhood Education Act" linked in your writing, but it says that neither of these pages exist. Otherwise, good work! Autumns310 (talk) 18:22, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Response to feedback
Thank you for your feedback, Autumn! I am making additional edits to the article today because I believe the article could use more development. I am currently trying to fix the links in my writing that do not work. I am grateful that you brought that to my attention! Thanks again. Streme2 (talk) 21:39, 30 November 2018 (UTC)