User talk:Stroujak/sandbox

Amrprix (talk) 23:23, 20 October 2019 (UTC)Amrprix (Alice Price) Divide out the structure so that the lead article stands alone and includes at least one summary sentence or phrase related to the content that you have added. Add images! Extend using the research below. You have two good sources, but you have not sufficiently mined them. Extend what you use from these. These additional references are available at our library: Sibylle Erle (2018) Blake, Ludwig Meidner and Expressionism, Visual Culture in Britain, 19:3, 335-349, DOI: 10.1080/14714787.2018.1534606 Hoffmann-Curtius, Kathrin, and Sigrid Philipps. Judenmord: Art and the Holocaust in Post-War Germany. London, UK: Reaktion Books Ltd, 2018. Barron, Stephanie, and Wolf Dieter Dube. German Expressionism: Art and Society. Milan: Bompiani, 1997. Tighten up the wording--use active voice and clear succinct phrasing--the same type of writing that you like to find when you go to Wikipedia.

Stroujak (talk) 22:20, 26 October 2019 (UTC) Thanks for the sources definitly looking into them, yet the one by Erle Sibylle was kindof confusing and I looked at it before and got a lost. Also I'm a little confused about what photos I can put up since I don't know if his works are public domain. The only piece on wiki is the one already on his page. When I tried to find if any of his pieces were already on wiki i came across this. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Ludwig_Meidner. Just a little confused and don't want to put in images that I'm not allow to. Amrprix (talk) 19:31, 27 October 2019 (UTC)AMRPRIX If you are confused about whether an image is okay to use, you should go ahead and do the scheduled upcoming training "Contributing Images and Media Files[see timeline Week 11]." For the one article, if you are struggling, you should come in to office hours and we can go over specific sections that are difficult.