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YOU HAVE DECIDED TO WORK ON THE TERM PAPER  RJBazell (talk) 20:09, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

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Nice start on your draft, but I think you should be relying on a different type of source. Companies that sell insurance aren't neutral third parties or scholarly sources. These are designed for marketing, and can't be considered reliable sources. You need to look for peer reviewed literature and scholarly works. If you're having trouble finding these kinds of sources, I strongly recommend that you talk to an academic librarian. They're the experts at finding sources, and are generally more than happy to help. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:19, 15 March 2018 (UTC)