User talk:StuckInThought/sandbox

Peer Review
I think it would be helpful to explicitly define terms such as "lump-sum" for people that may not necessarily know what it is or link that Wikipedia article to it the first time it is mentioned. I think the division of the sections was especially well done and that the information was appropriate and unbiased and that the citations were correctly used. Celsisa (talk) 03:42, 9 March 2018 (UTC)