User talk:Student melissa/sandbox

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How can Identity politics be added to this discourse Student melissa (talk) 21:28, 13 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
I love the topic of this article and would love to read more about it! What you have so far is a great definition and explanation of the topic. I think all that is missing so far are the subheadings and a paragraph in the introduction that explains the main concepts and subheadings of your article. Good sources so far. A good article to look at might be the Dorothy Roberts "Killing the Black Body" that we examined in class. Snmills (talk) 20:38, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

You are on the right track and the topic is such a great choice. You definitely can tell you know what you want to talk about and the information that you want to bring to the table to discuss. The layout just needs to be worked on a little bit and getting a stronger lead paragraph to really bring us in more to the topic. ANIKAA26 (talk) 04:56, 27 April 2018 (UTC)

The peer reviews were very helpful and I look forward to working on the layout and structure of my page Student melissa (talk) 06:11, 30 April 2018 (UTC) Student melissa (talk) 06:11, 30 April 2018 (UTC)