User talk:Studentdocvik

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Hello, Studentdocvik, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Work Plan
For the article on vacuum aspiration, I would like to go in and come up with a better-worded definition of the procedure. I think that using some newer resources would be helpful for this. I would like to have some resources to back up the safety of the procedure because currently, this is a topic that is addressed, and statements are made without resources to back this up. I would also like to update the section on benefits over D&C. This is another section that could use some better resources. I don't think there are currently any changes to make to the description of the procedure itself, but this is something to maybe reevaluate later. I think the updated definition and resources for the safety of the procedure are the most important focus for now.

Studentdocvik (talk) 22:54, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
The additions you made to this article were great, Studentdocvik! It really made the article more well rounded and complete. The only thing I could possibly think of that may need to be improved is updating the sources that are used -- a few of the references cite Baird (2001) and another source from 1994 (Mahomed). Other than that, keep on doing what you're doing. It's looking great! ChefJeffLi (talk) 20:13, 15 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much for your feedback! I have been unable to find more recent articles with the supporting information from the older articles you listed, unfortunately. This is definitely a growing field of research. I added in newer resources where possible, but I felt it would be good to leave the older ones as well for context! Studentdocvik (talk) 16:49, 23 March 2022 (UTC)