User talk:Studentofhistory/sandbox

Hi Olivia! From what I have read, it seems that your format for the topic you chose is organized and I am sure that you will be fine in writing this article. One thing that I noticed is the lack of sources. Most of the paragraphs that you wrote come from one source only. I am sure you will be able to find more sources but I just thought of pointing that out. The titles for the paragraphs give a clear understanding of what you will be talking about which is important. I think that you are on the right track and that you will be able to do a well-written article.