User talk:SturrFry/Carbon sequestration

Hi Dr. Cassell! -Nick

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Nice work on your draft ! Some things going forward. One is very minor - references go after punctuation, not before, according to Wikipedia's style guide. The other is that you should try to include secondary sources instead of just relying on government websites. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:01, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * One more thing, you say: In recent years. It's best to be more specific, time-wise, because Wikipedia articles aren't dated. If that isn't updated, it can become out of date. So it's best to include a more specific time frame. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:03, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

I agree with Ian. This is a good draft but additional sources would be helpful. I also think it would be nice to know if there's any evidence of its effect. Where is carbon sequestration in the redevelopment of wetlands being used? Is there any geographic information? How effective is it? What are the strengths and weaknesses? What are the costs? Some images might also be helpful if you can find examples that you can use. Overall, nice job. Cassell04 (talk) 20:00, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Hi Nick! I think everything you have looks really good. I actually learned something by reading over your paragraphs, so thank you! Keep up the good work! :) - Devin 2601:546:C080:5FE0:E1BA:64AC:5858:C43 (talk) 18:49, 13 March 2021 (UTC)