User talk:Subornolota

Your submission at AfC Textiles of Bangladesh (September 8)
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Hello Subornolota, this is a very good start, and a topic which very much should be covered on Wikipedia. There are a few things to improve before we publish the article.


 * Please use standard punctuation: there is no space before a ".", and one space after, and the first letter of a setence must be capitalised. You are leaving a space before the "." and none after.
 * Wikipedia articles don't have a "conclusion", and any opinions/analysis must be explicitly cited to an academic/journalist/etc, as we do not allow the opinion of the editor to interject (see WP:No original research)
 * Please use WP:Sections to divide up the piece. If your intent is to list a number of types of cloth, a section named ==Types== would be useful, and perhaps a section ==History== before that?
 * Your article lacks a clear WP:Lead section that establishes the basic who-what-when-where-why of the topic. Something like (and this is a fictional example): "The history of textiles of Bangladesh goes back to 3000 BC, when the first peoples there etc. etc. But by 500 AD there was a a regular trade. etc. etc. In the modern era, now textiles are etc. etc." Just a basic 1 paragraph which gives the absolutely most key basic details about textiles in Bangladesh.
 * Rather than just listing your source at the end, please use WP:Footnotes so that readers can see where different facts came from. It would also be good to have a wider body of sourcing. Maybe run some searches on GoogleBooks and see if there are some good academic books on textile history which can verify more facts about Bangladesh for this article to expand?

Overall, good start. If you're looking for a model to follow, the article Textiles of Mexico is a very good one. I would look over that one, how it is structured, how it is coded, and use that as an example. You don't have to be as long or as complete as that one to publish, but it can give you some good ideas of how to build your article. Good luck, and nice work so far! MatthewVanitas (talk) 13:05, 8 September 2013 (UTC)

Re: Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Textiles of Bangladesh
Please don't forget to write a WP:Lead section. See my highlighted comments at the top of your draft. MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:50, 24 September 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Textiles of Bangladesh (September 28)
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Your submission at AfC Textiles of Bangladesh was accepted
 Textiles of Bangladesh, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Northamerica1000(talk) 20:07, 9 December 2013 (UTC)
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