User talk:SukLanSer

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Hello, SukLanSer, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Nice start on your article, but the lead section needs some work. The lead should summarize all the main points of the article, and should not include any information that isn't discussed in the body of the article. Right now, your lead reads more like an introductory paragraph, not a summary. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:31, 13 September 2018 (UTC)

Do not delete or change an article's talk page content once people have responded - revert of your comment explained
This is a heads up that you deleted/changed content on the talk page of the article Granny dumping twice now. This was inappropriate. Your comment had already been responded to in the thread that followed. Your deletion and change thus rendered the response given to you meaningless to others as it completely lost its context. Wikipedia does not work this way.

If you want to make a change to your comment, before someone has responded, you are free to do so. However, if someone has responded you either:

a) use the strike feature, such as strike , which demonstrates that you retract the word/comment, or

b) respond beneath the person's comment you are replying to

In keeping with this, I have reverted your last entry, so that my response to it still makes sense. Additionally, in a previous edit, I had already used 'strike' to repair your first deletion. Ask your teachers for advice and clarification if needed. Surely, it must be their job to guide you. Veritycheck✔️ (talk) 17:54, 21 September 2018 (UTC)