User talk:Sukh17/Archive 2

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Because of your interest in schools, I suggest that you look at WikiProject Schools for additional ideas and to sign up with the group. --Hjal 07:34, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

American High School
This page needs to be moved back to American High School (Fremont, California) and then American High School should be turned into a disambiguation page. There is already another AHS in Wikipedia, American High School (Miami-Dade County, Florida), and there are dozens of "American High Schools" in Europe that may need to be listed as articles are created. I don't think that there is official policy requiring school articles to be created as "School Name (City, State)", but that practice should probably be used unless the school name is clearly unique in the English-speaking world. Locally, James Logan and Newark Memorial seem to be unique, but there may be a Memorial High School in Newark, New Jersey, there are lots of Washingtons and Kennedys, and there are towns in New York and New Jersey called Irvington.

If this change is not made now, there will almost certainly be extra work required to resolve disputes later

Tying the Fremont schools together with the Fremont Unified School District and Mission Valley Athletic League articles is a big improvement, although these articles will need references and categories soon or they will be taggged for cleanup, if not deletion. (Not by me. If you haven't noticed yet, there are some editors who don't like school-related articles much.)  I have been working on Washington High School, Newark Memorial High School (where I temporarily added information about NUSD pending creation of an article), and a little on James Logan High School. I've done some work on Fremont as well. I hope that we can complement each other's efforts. --Hjal 07:34, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

FUSD articles on elementary and junior high schools
You have bee working hard. I suggest that you take a break and read both WP:SCHOOL and its talk page. Please read it all, maybe even the archived discussion. I think that your elementary school pages are in immediate danger of being nominated for deletion as non-notable or as the contents of a directory, which is WP:NOT. I suggest that you then do the following before trying to expand them as separate articles:

--Hjal 05:42, 6 December 2006 (UTC)
 * merge all of the elementary school and junior high articles to the District article as seperate sections with a uniform section head format; that will allow people to find them with the search function and to link to the specific sections from other articles; if merging is beyond your skill--and I'm not sure how to do it--copy all of the content there so you don't lose it (I will help defend the District page if anybody nominates it at AfD, but I'm nobody here either, so don't count on me to prevail);
 * design a table that summarizes the attendance area setup shown on the District's page, plus other information that makes it a better resource, such as numbers of students and faculty, name of the principal, and a link to their official page;
 * then expand any of the individual sections that you think are worthy of an independent article, covering the subsections in the outline at WikiProject Schools, with citations to Wikipedia articles by others or to verifiable and reliable publications, using the District site and school newsletters to provide leads for Google searches (don't give undue weight to the deletionists who demand that school articles be sourced to multiple articles in national newspapers of record or peer-reviewed journals--that goes way bewond official policy--but try to find substantive articles in the ANG newspapers, the Oakland Tribune, or the Mercury News if you can)
 * individual schools without developed sections on their history, campus buildings, notable events, etc., should stay on the district page; you can build what some consider meaningful sections on these subjects by finding articles that provide information on when they were built, ties to specific subdivisions or other developments, notable architects, hard-fought bond campaigns, battles over attendance wars (at least for the Mission San Jose attendance area ;-); and, unfortunately, any associated scandals and atrocities such as the Gwen Araujo murder in Newark)