User talk:Sukj316/sandbox

Hi John,

Looking good! I have a couple of points I wanted to mention. -Ms. Becvar Kairyth (talk) 16:50, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Word count is low - only 765. Were you going to include a picture? Even if you do have a picture, you need to have at least 800 words.
 * A good variety of outside sources.
 * Writing is very good, and shows good neutrality.