User talk:Sulfurboy/Archive/2015/June

Frankie MacDonald
Hi. I have reverted your tag for notability. Article has already been discussed at AfD where the result was keep. Please see [] Regards,  Aloha27   talk  06:33, 17 June 2015 (UTC)

Note about tagging
I left a note for you on the The Last Death of Henry Morgan's talk page.SciGal (talk) 09:48, 17 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Never mind, the tag has been removed since I linked it to the main article.SciGal (talk) 09:49, 17 June 2015 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Stefaniya Staniyuta
Hello Sulfurboy. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Stefaniya Staniyuta, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: If she qualifies for a special postage stamp, that is certainly enough assertion of importance to pass A7. Thank you. JohnCD (talk) 21:06, 17 June 2015 (UTC)

Vracejte konve na místo.
Hello, friend.

I don' t understand your comment in my article very well, and I'd like to explain to me what do you mean.

This article has verifiable sources in Czech languaje (no broken links). Then, what is the problem?vThanks! Apega71 (talk) 01:12, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank You
Thanks a lot for reviewing Darshan filmography and Shiva Rajkumar filmography.    ~ Irrigator   talk  01:19, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for reviewing Kim Yoo-jin (director).Jjaey (talk) 05:35, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Thanks
Thankyou for reviewing CSLRA; please tell how to improve it and what links are required to be incorporated in it to make it workable Srin2015 (talk) 06:55, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Kazakhstani women's football cup
Hi, I'm Кырмызов! I would like to ask you removals of this page (Kazakhstani women's football cup) because already there is a page devoted to the Women's Cup of Kazakhstan (Kazakhstani Women's Cup). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Кырмызов (talk • contribs) 06:57, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you
Thank you for reviewing Nanami Hashimoto.Cutebassa (talk) 11:24, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Thanks
hi thank you, I don't speak much English and this is my first participation in Wikipedia .Amaneea99  — Preceding undated comment added 12:01, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Looney Tunes Home Video
Hey, man. :( What did I do wrong? I was only trying to make Looney Tunes-related Laserdisc Collections. :( --LooneyTunerIan (talk) 19:30, 18 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Which tags are you confused about? They should be pretty obvious. The main problem is you don't have any references and the articles are orphans.Sulfurboy (talk) 19:32, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Tags? I didn't know I needed to add tags. I thought the categories were tags. --LooneyTunerIan (talk) 19:55, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Bush6984 responding
Hey, thank you for introducing yourself. I appreciate that human connection aspect (rather than just posting/tagging "silently"). While I still am relatively unfamiliar with the infinite complexity of Wikipedia's various editing facets, I appreciate the "coaching" from friendly Wikipedians like yourself. Thanks for the help.

Also, I apologize if I've overstepped my bounds by editing your page(s), but I noticed a few things and corrected them:
 * I had to look up CSD and AFD, so I went ahead and added links to those, for any other newbies who are unfamiliar with the acronyms.
 * In the "Please read my quick, personal FAQ before leaving a comment..." post, the grammar had the wrong usage of "your": "you're" is a contraction of "you + are" whereas the possessive "your/yours" is what you were looking for when you said "if you're question could be answered..." (the following usage, "the article you're referencing,..." is a correct you+are usage)

Thanks again for the help and introduction, for all the info/links on your page, and my apologies if I somehow offended you with any of my edits to your pages. Bush6984 (talk) 21:41, 17 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks for this! Sulfurboy (talk) 20:14, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

The Suspension Module that builds a parametric chassis
Hi Sulfurboy, can you tell me what's the problem with my article, to fix it. Tell me one by one the problems please and don't delete it, let me fix it. Thank you — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gkalogiantsidis (talk • contribs) 20:20, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

The Suspension Module that builds a parametric chassis
Sulfurboy, are you kidding me, did you even see what i sent you.... ??? I sent you, don't delete my article and let me fix it and you just deleted it without any answer......

If you think that was from promo purpose, please tell me why this article is on wikipedia ??? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gkalogiantsidis (talk • contribs) 21:35, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Ultra
Hi! Thanks for helping me. I just started editing in English, I usually edit in Portuguese Wikipedia. I fixed the problems you mentioned. Let me know of you see anything else! Thanks! PicardJ (talk) 23:09, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Vulcan blazers
You recently reviewed the draft and concluded one section was overly long and you didn't know what it was about. I think you need to review your review, as the section you were referring to is not a part of the draft, and your changes have made it seen that it is part of the lede! That section was a rebuttal to another editor whose comment was the one that pops up when scrolling the drafts stating that the article was 'blatant self promotion', which he declined to remove. It pre-judged the article which was subsequently re-written in the current form and you have now followed up in mis-judging the point of the article. I would ask that you take another look and find the beginning of the lede and judge the article from that point on. Robco311 (talk) 01:43, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I did look at it from the 'lead', I wasn't referring to the comments before in my review at all. Sulfurboy (talk) 01:44, 19 June 2015 (UTC).

Dear Sulfurboy Thanks for yours  review of  the Hidayat al-Muta`allemin Fi al-Tibb,this is the first book about medical emergency in Persian language  from one thousand ago ,I hope this article  will be better in future  with help of  lovers of  history and culture of the world  like you. Thank you very much.--Realmastery (talk) 05:40, 19 June 2015 (UTC)

07:44:30, 19 June 2015 review of submission by Bumsnuggler
Michael Alan Lerner is a screenwriter who has written many movies starring people who are notable enough to already have a wikipedia page. I've seen entries far less worthy of having a wiki page. All my sources are from major publications like the NY Times and Variety. Why is this page continually rejected?

Bumsnuggler (talk) 07:44, 19 June 2015 (UTC)

Fun School series
Greetings. It's nice to see you're keeping an eye on my work on the Fun School articles. The first Fun School games are not very well known, hence their absence from the main article. I found a couple of magazine references, but haven't been able find anything else other than scans and images of the cassettes and disks, I just hope the notability of Fun School 1 is adequate. While I'm creating articles on Fun School 3 onwards, I shall provide reliable reception references wherever I can find them. Any assistance you can provide, will be appreciated. It's nice to archive what is now practically forgotten software. Deltasim (talk) 10:20, 19 June 2015 (UTC)

Welcome to the AfC team!
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New Page Patrol
Hi. Thank you  for patrolling  new pages. The review you left  at  User talk:Riverviewhouse is incomplete and the article has many  issues. Please return to it and address them. Thanks. --Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 03:05, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

Draft:ISS Art
Hi, thanks for reviewing ISS Art article. Unfortunately, it was declined again for the reason of lack of "secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject". I would like to disagree on this point - the article contains references to such resources as IAOP, Clutch, Fortune 500 Magazine. These are completely independent resources, they don't have any commercial interest in promoting the company.

As for the notability of organizations, one should "consider whether they have had any significant or demonstrable effects on culture, society, entertainment, athletics, economies, history, literature, science, or education". As described in the article, ISS Art is involved in community activities, and this is supported by evidence from independent resources (online newspapers and magazines).

Could you, please, clarify, what kind of information does the article still lack to get published?

Btw, I'd like to provide examples of two articles about software development companies that were pubslished (although they might not meet the above mentioned criteria as well):

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Azoft

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sibers

Thank you in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Olga Rekovskaya (talk • contribs) 06:08, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

I have unreviewed a page you curated
Hi, I'm Fylbecatulous. I wanted to let you know that I saw the page you reviewed, Unspeakables Crew, and have un-reviewed it again. If you have any questions, please ask them on my talk page. Thank you. Fylbecatulous talk 13:07, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

Sports Medicine Model of Care
I do not believe that the article sports medicine model of care should be deleted. It is a concept that many individuals use worldwide, but there is little easy access information on the content. The information is generalized, does not support a specific company or organization, and specific information is referenced. (Halifax2015 (talk) 18:59, 22 June 2015 (UTC))


 * Hyperlink please. Sulfurboy (talk) 20:11, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

Page Title & Move protection
Hi, please I need your help! I want you to change the page title from "Muhammad al-Tahir ibn Ashur" to "Muhammad Al-Tahir Ibn Ashur". Thanks and sorry for any inconvenience! --BiKaz (talk) 03:33, 22 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Hyperlink please. Sulfurboy (talk) 20:12, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

Push Interactions
You tagged my article Push Interactions. What this means I don't know. But if we need to add more links we can. The links are quite a bit larger than the content at this point...Thanks.


 * Hyperlink please. Sulfurboy (talk) 20:14, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

hi
Hey Sulfurboy, you were right to tag the medical device company page - I'd left in so much info on the awards that's what it looked like. Truthfully I could find practically no info on the company except the awards when I did (admittedly not too thorough) research, so I wanted the awards to help shield the page against hasty immediate deletion tags (which give me heart attacks). If it catches your interest, I did a quick cleanup and would curious to see your opinion on the new version (if the awards still keep it past the notability threshold or not as well, even with rmved sources). Thanks :) Earflaps (talk) 20:06, 22 June 2015 (UTC)


 * The whole article reads more like a press release than an encyclopedic article. Notability needs to be established this isn't contingent on a certain amount of awards, but instead secondary, neutral press coverage (WP:CORP). The external links are a bit unnecessary and spammy as well. Sulfurboy (talk) 20:15, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Gotcha, thx for the look. At some point I'll do another foray into google, see if I can find some less crappy links. Earflaps (talk) 03:23, 23 June 2015 (UTC)

Beth Keller notability tag
Hi Graham,

I randomly found the Beth Keller article, which was in danger of being automatically deleted. The article continues to have multiple issues, but at this point I have added enough reliable sources (some have very good coverage) to believe that the subject is notable. As requested, I added comments on the article's talk page. Whenever you have a chance, please examine the situation and consider withdrawing the notability tag if you agree it's no longer appropriate (although the other tags most certainly are). Many thanks in advance, and have a nice day. Dontreader (talk) 09:30, 23 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Done. Thanks. Sulfurboy (talk) 17:37, 23 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you very much, Graham. Have a nice day! Dontreader (talk) 17:40, 23 June 2015 (UTC)

Hello
Yeah I didn't understand what you mean on your message, if it is possible you can give me more information I would appreciate it Lasarito (talk) 00:12, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Hyperlink to the article you're talking about please. Sulfurboy (talk) 00:12, 24 June 2015 (UTC)

Fabio Buzzi
Thank you for your suggestion about references on Fabio Buzzi page. I added some general refernces about the biography, and I started to add references to the official registry of his sport results. I hope it is ok. Please give me an "ok" before I go on adding more references. --Rrroberto (talk) 10:03, 22 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Hyperlink please. Sulfurboy (talk) 20:11, 22 June 2015 (UTC)


 * You mean of the page Fabio Buzzi? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fabio_Buzzi? I can't understand if now it is ok or not. If you say it's ok I go on adding references. Rrroberto (talk) 08:26, 24 June 2015 (UTC)

Bynder Brand Portal
Hi Sulfurboy, thank you for your comment at my article. I would like to contribute more and better and would like to request therefore your help.

First: You marked this article as an orphan, but its not an orphan anymore. Could you please remove that notification?

I would like to know more about why this article seems to be written an advertisement, needs additional citations for verification and may contain an excessive amount of intricate detail that may only interest a specific audience. I've checked the existing articles in French and German, but these notifications are not made there. Could you tell me at least which passages are meant? It's a little difficult for me to find out, what exactly doesn't meet the criteria, if the whole article is mentioned.

Thanks so far and Greets - Phil was here 11:53, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
 * As it says at the top of this page, please hyperlink to your article.Sulfurboy (talk) 12:20, 24 June 2015 (UTC)

Request on 13:44:34, 24 June 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Aimetis Corp
Hi Sulfurboy, You declined my submission for the Aimetis Corp page and I am working on rewriting the content so that I can resubmit it. I am making sure that all of the content is neutral. I am also looking for stronger references, not press releases. Would you recommend that I remove all of the product information (the Solutions section)?

Thank you for your help!

Aimetis Corp (talk) 13:44, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Can you please hyperlink to the draft page? Thanks.Sulfurboy (talk) 00:42, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aimetis_Corp/sandbox

Serato DJ
Hi Sulfurboy. Thank you for your work on patrolling new pages and tagging for speedy deletion. I'm just letting you know that I declined your deletion request for Serato DJ, a page that you tagged for speedy deletion, under criterion G11 because the criterion you used or the reason you gave does not cover this kind of page. I do not see any issues related to WP:NPOV. At the very least, this is definitely not unambiguous advertising. Feel free to nominate for AfD if you disagree, but as the advertising is not unambiguous (if it's there at all), G11 does not apply. Please take a moment to look at the suggested tasks for patrollers, criteria for speedy deletion, and particularly, the section covering non-criteria. Such pages are best tagged with proposed deletion or proposed deletion for biographies of living persons, or sent to the appropriate deletion discussion. Thanks! ~ RobTalk 01:02, 24 June 2015 (UTC)


 * I've posted regarding the WP:NPOV claims on Talk:Serato DJ. Could you please respond there so all interested editors can discuss the issue and determine what can be done to fix it (if anything)? ~ RobTalk 01:30, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

Draft:IVISYS
Bare URLs isn't a valid criterion for rejecting an article, see WikiProject Articles for creation/Reviewing instructions, which specifically says "Avoid declining an article because the references contain bare URLs or other reference formatting problems. Instead, run the Reflinks Tool or tag the article with or ." I've reverted your decline based on bare URLs, and have used Refill to fill the bare URLs. Joseph2302 (talk) 17:26, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I already ran refill and accepted the article. Sulfurboy (talk) 17:27, 25 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Also, why did you accept Alejandro Gómez Bermúdez? There was a clear comment about it from me here that I'm trying to get a consensus on whether the Costa Rican League is fully professional or not, the outcome of which has not been decided, and is pivotal to whether or not he passes WP:NFOOTY. Joseph2302 (talk) 17:33, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Is 2007 FIFA U-20 World Cup not a tier 1 event? Further the press coverage contends enough to pass GNG in my opinion. If you want to tag the page with a notability template until your footy debate is finished, then go for it, but I don't think his notability hinges on it at all.Sulfurboy (talk) 17:39, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * No it isn't, a Tier 1 match has to involve the "A" representatives of both teams, . Which means the Olympics isn't either (which it looks like he might have played in), because it's an U-23 tournament. I'll tag with notability, I'm certain he doesn't pass WP:GNG. Joseph2302 (talk) 17:42, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

18:42:23, 25 June 2015 review of submission by 2406:5600:64:F303:9018:5374:AE35:895
2406:5600:64:F303:9018:5374:AE35:895 (talk) 18:42, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

Request on 19:36:57, 25 June 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Mds43
I don't understand why this post keeps getting rejected. I completely pared it down so it could not be construed as biased at all and now you are saying it is not "notable" enough for Wikipedia. Catapult Chicago is a notable co-working space in Chicago that has "graduated" several notable companies (including BucketFeet, which has it's own Wikipedia page) and several notable sponsors (also with their own Wikipedia pages).

Mds43 (talk) 19:36, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * It lacks encyclopedic context. The article reads more like a press release than an article. More notable sources would help too. Feel free to page me when you've edited it some more.Sulfurboy (talk) 19:39, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

Request on 19:46:29, 25 June 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Robot19332
Hello, I recently created a submission to be approved for Actor Jason Adelman. it was rejected due to insufficient sources, hwoeveer I sourced every credit using IMDB, People, US Weekly, Wikipedia, Sundance Films. What is the issue with these, as most movies and television shows are sourced in the above articles..Please help so I can cure this mistake and make the page go live.

Robot19332 (talk) 19:46, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Those three articles are more about Karina Smirnoff than Jason Adelman. There needs to be independent reporting on just him.Sulfurboy (talk) 19:48, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

Mohd Ikhmil Fawedz Mohd Hanif
I'm still new to wikipedia. still trying to understand more on how to add cite, reference etc. This is my response to your tag to this https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mohd_Ikhmil_Fawedz_Mohd_Hanif (Bib divher (talk) 19:42, 25 June 2015 (UTC)) Moved from top of page ~ RobTalk 19:47, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Reading the template posted on the page and following the hyperlinks for more information should answer all your questions. If after doing that you still have questions, please let me know.Sulfurboy (talk) 19:50, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

Careful
When you notify someone that you've approved their AfC submission... make sure you're notifying the right person.

I'm not the one who created the article about Mr Arntfield. DS (talk) 21:45, 25 June 2015 (UTC)


 * (talk page stalker) Were you the one who submitted the draft though? Because if you accept an AfC using the automatic helper script (which most people do), it automatically messages the person who submitted the draft, not the article creator. Joseph2302 (talk) 21:48, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I was not. DS (talk) 21:50, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Hmm, that's very strange, I only use the automated script, so I'm not sure what happened.Sulfurboy (talk) 21:56, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * You may want to notify user:Kayreif. DS (talk) 00:11, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

05:27:17, 26 June 2015 review of submission by Ohiseered
Hi Sulfurboy,

Please let me know how I can edit this article well for a successful submission. I have cleaned up some of the links. Thanks.

Ohiseered (talk) 05:27, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

06:48:15, 26 June 2015 review of submission by Atinavp
Could you be more specific as to what was not correct about my citation. This is my first contribution page and i am not super familiar with the format and how we should edit/add content.

Atinavp (talk) 06:48, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Adam Torres (musician)
Here is the note on your talk page that you requested at WP:AFCHD. Hope that helps. --Hroðulf (or Hrothulf) (Talk) 12:58, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

Hi, here is the hyperlink to the draft -- Draft:Adam_Torres_(musician). I cleaned up the references of the article and added a few things. Thank you for your time!

Draft talk:SleepBot#Notability
Hi! Please see Draft talk:SleepBot. Thank you! —Unforgettableid (talk) 23:23, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

Request on 16:54:06, 27 June 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Twonalib
Hello Sulfurboy. I am new to Wikipedia and started out with an entry on the Fisher Center for Alzheimer's Research Foundation, which you recently rejected. I wasn't clear on why the subject is not worthy of inclusion. I had a number of references in there from independent sources, including from The New York Times, where I am a science editor. Is this not sufficient? I was interested in the subject because I have used Paul Greengard, the nobel laureate, as a source and was wondering why the fisher center was not included with a brief entry. It is cited in numerous places elsewhere in Wikipedia but had no "home" page. Please let me know what kinds of sources might be appropriate if the Times is not? Thank you.

Twonalib (talk) 16:54, 27 June 2015 (UTC)

Jason Adelman - Draft
Hi Sulferboy, I appreciate your feedback and help to get Jason Adelman's page, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Jason_Adelman published. I believe I addressed your issues on his engagement to Smirnoff, as well as added more sources and including more on his bio. please let me know if there are any other concerns so we can get this approved. I hope your having a relaxing weekend1 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Robot19332 (talk • contribs) 17:02, 27 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you and Can I change my article page heading/username
Hi Sulfurboy,

Thank you for approving Bouclair Home contribution. I however, would like to change the heading/redirect link/direct link of the page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Urbashi_Chatterjee) to Bouclair Home. It is currently Urbashi Chatterjee and looks pretty odd as my user page talking about the company. Can the article be better named?

I also want to delete my sandbox history so that article appears as a BOuclair page on Wikipedia and not as my Sandbox contribution or user page. Please help. Thanks

Urbashi Chatterjee (talk) 11:18, 29 June 2015 (UTC)Urbashi ChatterjeeUrbashi Chatterjee (talk) 11:18, 29 June 2015 (UTC)

19:15:08, 29 June 2015 review of submission by Nictic
The article is not yet ready for a re-review, but we will request another review once the comments about the sources have been addressed.

Nictic (talk) 19:15, 29 June 2015 (UTC) Good day,

Thank you for reviewing our Umtsimba article so soon after our first submission. We are keen to address the issues you raised and plan to re-submit the article within the next week. To help guide our efforts, may I please ask you to clarify whether the main problem is that there are not enough reliable sources or that we are not referencing the sources throughout the article. It may be that both these are problems that we need to address. Lastly, can you please let me know what "OR" stands for in the comment that was added: "Hard to doubt OR without it". Maybe Original Research?

Kind regards, Nictic Nictic (talk) 19:15, 29 June 2015 (UTC)

Athari
Hi! This article Athari needs to be linked with this Arabic one أهل الحديث

"The link arwiki:أهل الحديث is already used by item Ahl al-Hadith (Q400320). You may remove it from Ahl al-Hadith (Q400320) if it does not belong there or merge the items if they are about the exact same topic."

Hope you can fix it. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by BiKaz (talk • contribs) 21:54, 29 June 2015 (UTC)