User talk:Summer254/Gender neutrality

You offer some useful additions here, Summer254, but it would have been very helpful to your reviewers if you had: 1) not added so much of the article to your page--only the sections you were adding to, and 2) marked your additions or edits more clearly. This took a lot of work to sort out because there were so many sections where I could not find any changes at all.

The bit on gender blindness seems reasonable, though that section is pretty choppy, so figuring out a way to better integrate your edits would be good. The section you have added on parenting adds the more traditional perspectives, but it needs to be framed as such. In its current form it does not flow well into the rest of the section. Also, be sure to edit more closely and use Wikipedia's format for citations.

If there are additional bits in the other sections that I have missed, you will need to let me know. --Jbdolphin (talk) 06:23, 12 May 2021 (UTC)