User talk:Sunavsky

Welcome!
Hello, Sunavsky, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:24, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

Suggested content changes
Good job with your first Wiki edit! For now, I have moved your suggestions to your sandbox. I added comments inline. If you need help, leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks! JenOttawa (talk) 15:07, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Just wanted to make sure that you are getting this message. I sent one as well to a couple of your group members.
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sunavsky/sandbox
 * Please read through my comments and modify your suggestions. When you have finished, please let me know and I can help you add it back to the talk page. If you have any questions, you can email me or leave me a message on my talk page.
 * Thanks,
 * JenOttawa (talk) 00:04, 5 November 2017 (UTC)

proposed edits
Your sandbox is looking good. You have a large section at the end that needs to be removed. Did you make up your mind about including the large section that I put in italics? I still suggest that you start small, get used to Wiki editing, and then you are welcome to return and add content and continue to navigate the world of Wikipedia. Of note, when any new editor (regardless of if they are students) adds a large amount of content at one time to an article, there is a risk of all your work being reverted. This is because it can be difficult for the volunteer Wikipedians to monitor all the edits and maintain the high quality of content in the articles. JenOttawa (talk) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Talk page
Your talk page looks good. I removed the bottom content, as it was not yet formatted for the talk page. Please format it in your sandbox first (insert citations, remove explanations). Thanks!JenOttawa (talk) 02:30, 8 November 2017 (UTC)

Your edits so far
Great job on your edits so far! Can you please remind all your group members to be sure to sign into Wikipedia before you edit the articles or add to the talk pages? This helps the Wikipedia community recognize you as the person who proposed the changes already on the talk page. This what it looks like when you are signed out: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Urinary_retention&type=revision&diff=811308955&oldid=810556059 Thanks for all your efforts so far on Wikipedia. Keep up the great work! JenOttawa (talk) 03:57, 21 November 2017 (UTC)