User talk:Sundipkhosa/sandbox

Sundip,

This is a great start to a Wikipedia page and allows for others to come in and expand on the topic that you've created! It's a very simple yet well explained subject and I think you've made it quite easy to read and understand for someone, uneducated on the topic on bacteria. One thing that would make a strong addition to your page is relating it back to humans. I can see outlined, the effects it has on plants and animals and vise versa, but I find the human link is somewhat missing. Some topics you may want to consider is intestinal flora or the bacteria that maybe cause infections in our bodies. I think it will really drive the point home! Besides, our intestines and our bodies in general are also an environment for the bacteria that thrive in it.

Great job!

Sanaah

Sundip. Great overall page and concise enough to still understand the point. Interesting topic to choose as well! Couple things to maybe look at: -Maybe to create your sections into how they affect different environments. You could easily split them up into Aqautic, Forest (or plants) and Humans. -I like your intro but maybe mention more specifically how it works in the food web. It is very important. -When using words like "Lactobacillus" and "Bacillus thuringiensis", try and link them to their Wikipedia page if possible. -Add a See Also Page that can link users to Wikipedia pages such as Bacteria and simple big topics to do further reserach -I know its a pain, but if you could find a cool picture of one of the bacterias you talked about and put it in, it'll look really cool. Great job and cool concept. Beng0202 (talk) 09:40, 21 March 2013 (UTC)