User talk:Sunflower062/Deafness in Poland/Laurenmacch Peer Review

Content[edit]
All content added is relevant to the topic of Deafness in Poland. Most of the content is up-to-date. There is no content that does not belong in this article that has been added. This article addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics (being the Deaf community in Poland).

There are few instances of information that is not as current. For example, in the section of "Language Deprivation" where you mention a statistic from 2010 (that 40% of families with school-aged deaf children use sign language at home). However, most of the information is up-to-date.

Tone and Balance[edit]
The article is written in a neutral tone and is not biased. The content in the article includes facts and there are no instances of biased content within the article. The content does not attempt to persuade the reader in a certain direction.

There are article sections that have less information that others. For example, the "Higher Education", "Healthcare", and "Employment" sections do not have as much detail and information as the other sections (like the "Early hearing detection and intervention" or "Human and Civil Rights" sections). However, this might be due to a lack of available information on the topics or that the topics are in progress.

Sources and References[edit]
All content is backed up by a reliable source. However, there are multiple instances where claims do not have citations (there needs to be a citation after every claim, even if it is the same citation over and over).

For example, the "Deaf-led organizations" section has many claims that do not have a citation directly after them.

In the "Language Emergence" section you have a claim that is missing a citation; "The deaf communities in Poland have a small town located outside of Zaręby. This is where organizations are available to provide resources and extra help if needed. They also provide opportunities to the deaf community like jobs and scholarships".

In addition, under the "Human/civil rights and the CRPD" section you have a claim that is missing a citation. The claim is: "There have been reports of a high rate of sexual violence against both men and women in the DHH community in Poland. (as of 2018)".

The information in the "prevention" subsection of the "Language Deprivation" section does not have a citation.

Most of the sources are very current (2016-2022). However, there are a few sources that are less current, such as "Audiology Makes Rapid Advances in Poland" which was published in 2008. The links included in all citations work. The content in the article matches the information in the source.

Organization[edit]
The article is very organized. There are heading and subsections that make the content easy to follow. Specifically, the way you listed the Articles in the "Human /civil rights and the CRPD section" makes the section very easy to understand and read.

Also, I thought it was a good idea to link another wiki article ("language deprivation among deaf children") in your "Language Deprivation" section. It allows people who are uneducated on language deprivation to have a resource to learn about what it is.

There are no grammatical errors or spelling errors I noticed.

Images and Media[edit]
There are no Images.

There is one other Wikipedia article linked in the "Language Deprivation" section. Laurenmacch (talk) 17:37, 23 October 2022 (UTC)