User talk:Sunflowerroad

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Siegrid Alnoy
Ready for mainspace! CropMilk (talk) 15:00, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Great job! Good sources, well-structured, and well-written.
 * Minor recommendations before moving the article to mainspace: maybe a couple sentences linking the themes in her work, i.e. “Alnoy’s films explore themes of X,Y, and Z.” I’m sure one of your sources says something that can be cited to that effect.
 * Ensure that all factual claims are cited; the Television Films sections could use a couple more citations, or the sentences could be more clearly linked.
 * I also recommend adding to the lead section to make it a full paragraph, as that is a standard feature of Wikipedia articles. Some guidelines here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section