User talk:SunnYxXxxx/sandbox

Hippocratic Corpus Feedback
''Hi! You did an amazing job. Here is some of my feedback where I believe that you could improve! I think you could explain the humours more. Your beginning is great and I liked how you explained the hippocratic corpus and what it explains, however, you are missing an conclusion. You talked about what the authors of the Hippocratic Corpus described but did not mention why that is important and when they came up with it.Same with the mental illness part, it needs to be more detailed.'' SunnYxXxxx (talk) 22:53, 9 December 2022 (UTC)