User talk:Sunnysideup373/sandbox

Hi Sunnysideup373, here are my comments on your article evaluation:


 * It is interesting that you saw that the article appeared copy-pasted from a student essay, with in-text citations instead of Wikipedia-style citations. This seems like a relatively easy way to go about improving the article, and people are even complaining about it on the talk page Why do you think nobody has done this yet?

Groceryheist (talk) 18:35, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Did you consider making any changes yourself to address the shortcomings you observed with the article? Why or why not?


 * This page hasn't been touched since I believe 2014, so I guess interest in the page just fell off. Another thing is that maybe people are looking for something else to edit that isn't just in-text citations. I did consider making changes myself, but I would rather focus on another article where I might be a little more knowledgeable. This article also looks like it would take a lot of time to edit. It is really cluttered and lacks conciseness; it would be more time efficient to work on an article that simply needs expansion.

--Sunnysideup373 (talk) 08:05, 18 January 2019 (UTC)