User talk:Sunstarrrr/Clinical uses of mesenchymal stem cells

Peer Review

- Nice job adding new information about isolation of MCSCs and safety concerns! It is well organized and I think following this “chronological order” of sorts with the sections makes sense - Some minor grammar mistakes in the safety concerns section and some extra characters in some places; double check the ends of sentences to make sure things are formatted correctly - Some sentences may be able to be reworded so that they are more concise (ex. “Previous studies observing the safety of clinical mesenchymal stem cell use noted no serious side effects.”) - More treated disorders were added to the final section but they are not expanded on at all, is there anything to add about those? ScaleneTriangle (talk) 18:22, 29 November 2021 (UTC)