User talk:SuperSonic8.0/sandbox

Sandeep peer review for supersonic8.0
- Grammar need to be checked. - There is no general transition or structure so it needs to be corrected - There are no sources or citations so as reader, the information can be trusted - The article should have been around 500 words and it looks shorter than that - Using words like "mad" make the article subjective - More info about how the region was won by Argentina would be helpful to help the reader with the history - The geography information should be moved to the top as a introduction paragraph (restructuring the info)

Rachel peer review
- Good basic history of the town, but would like to see more details. Try to avoid phrases like "the most youthful and modern" as this is can be seen as a subjective statement. Some more information on the environment of this region would also be nice. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rrfay687 (talk • contribs) 06:54, 6 December 2017 (UTC)