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Peer Review
Hi!

This is definitely a really unique article topic. I didn't know that there was no preexisting Wikipedia page for camming, as I would've thought that there would be as it is a pretty significant industry. I think it's definitely helpful to have the background section to explain the history of how camming became popularized. The lead section gave a clear description of what camming entails and a good summary of the industry. I think it could be helpful in the lead section to lay out the rest of the article. The connection between camming and legal issues was really interesting to learn about and I can see how the two topics are closely related. However, I wasn't able to make as clear of a connection with privacy. It might already be drafted or still in the process, but I think it could be helpful to have a section that draws a clear connection between camming and privacy concerns to really help tie back the topic to privacy. I think that would be a pretty interesting connection to see as well. Other than that, I think it would also be helpful to have more citations throughout the article so that sources are linked. Overall a really interesting read and I'm curious to see what else is to be added!

Thisismyusername31 (talk) 15:37, 10 April 2021 (UTC)