User talk:Surferman155/sandbox

Talk page begins here!!! --Surferman155 (talk) 13:35, 9 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Replies have the colon --Surferman155 (talk) 13:36, 9 March 2020 (UTC)

What the group did well; layout is neat and very easy to follow. Descriptions are nice and brief, no useless information. Background section is quite helpful for understanding. Critiques; explain the history behind the blacksmiths and their association with it. Listing of the panel numbers should be grouped when possible, for example, panels 6-11 instead of listing them individually. Signature panel section should go before window panel section. Most important change(s); be more descriptive in the window panels and their descriptions!!! We also need a better lead. What we can apply to our own article; the background is super helpful, thank you i love you. Next part; needs a better lead with "More fluff," Crazyravensfan55 (talk) 13:55, 9 March 2020 (UTC) Crazyravensfan55, Masterboss77, Hhnguyen19, broseph-ratzinger,stillpope