User talk:SusanAchury

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Gayatri's peer review
--Good lead, Susan. In general this is an informative article. However it could use some copyediting for greater clarity and readability as well as correct sourcing. I wonder in the last paragraph of the lead if you want to say "It may therefore be invoked by any person who believes that any of his rights, implicitly or explicitly protected by the constitution, another law (or by applicable international treaties), is being violated." -- should this be "are" being violated? Usage, mostly.--GDevi17745 (talk) 14:46, 8 August 2018 (UTC)GDevi17745

--I don't know if the Origins in Mexico section should start with a reference to Philippines. Perhaps start with Mexico and then end the section with Philippines?--GDevi17745 (talk) 14:46, 8 August 2018 (UTC)GDevi17745

--In this Mexico section, the language could be edited to avoid certain subjective takes such as "great writ". --GDevi17745 (talk) 14:46, 8 August 2018 (UTC)GDevi17745

--the section on Colombia could also do with some copyediting to unravel the language and the claims.--GDevi17745 (talk) 14:46, 8 August 2018 (UTC)GDevi17745

-- the section on Haiti could benefit from clarifying what "the Filipino experience" refers to.--GDevi17745 (talk) 14:46, 8 August 2018 (UTC)GDevi17745

--the Extension to the World and UDHR section has good information but some of it needs to be sourced correctly and it needs to be copyedited as well for readability. --GDevi17745 (talk) 14:46, 8 August 2018 (UTC)GDevi17745

--I am reviewing your article as part of the course, Susan. I hope this works and you are able to see my comments on your talk page. --GDevi17745 (talk) 14:46, 8 August 2018 (UTC)GDevi17745

December 2018
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