User talk:SusanHumphreys

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Hi there. Yeah, I think getting rid of the facilities section, or at least compressing it, would help a lot. After all, it's not particularly notable that a hotel has beds etc. At the moment, the bulk of the space of the article seems to be on the stuff the hotel has, rather than why it's notable. Hope that helps. Feel free to reply here or on my talk page, I'll watch both. --Ged UK (talk) 21:45, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

Hi - I decided to completely remove the facilities section from the article. My main goal was to highlight the history of the hotel and agree with you, the facilities aren't what makes it notable. Thanks again for the advice. --SusanHumphreys (talk) 11:14, 4 September 2008


 * No problem, I think it's much better now, much more encyclopedic. I've removed the advert tag. --Ged UK (talk) 15:45, 4 September 2008 (UTC)