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The current state of the pin-up model Wikipedia page can be best described in one word: brief. There was a brief definition with synonyms that accompanied it. “a model whose mass-produced pictures see wide appeal as popular culture. Pin-ups are intended for informal display, i.e. meant to be "pinned-up" on a wall.” In addition there is a history section that goes into how pin-up models came about, but it lacks how pin up modeling has progressed today. Also, the page barely mentions male pin-ups and only discusses key players by name and does not mention their significance, men like James Dean and Jim Morrison. There is also a small section labeled “pin-up makeup” where it goes into what it looks like as well its reamurgence into the makeup of today, “The real business card of pin up makeup is red lipstick.”. Finally, there is a section on feminism and pin up, where they cited 2 people. It included a quick discussion on the opinions that are for and against pin up modeling. Some argue that it promotes positive body images while others argue that it exploits women and uses them as a sex object for men.

Under "Feminism and Pin-Up": In terms of pin-up and feminism, Buszek claims the models mentioned above, “...succeed in the feminist aim of changing the rigid, patriarchal terms.” In other words, pin-up allows for women to change the everyday culture. This adds to the claim that Pin-up modeling is indeed a feminist subculture, one invested in promoting positive body images and a love for one's sexuality, “...pin-up would also find ways to… encourage the erotic self-awareness and self expression of real women” (p. 364). Ultimately, this book adds to the limited information on the relationship between feminism and pin-up modeling as well as the historical information.

Add "Modern Day Pin-up" Section Another interesting thing I noticed on the present wikipedia page was the lack of information on present day pin-up models, as I had found out, enjoy a vibrant community. An example of this, which would add great information, is the magazine brand labeled, “Delicious Dolls”. “Delicious Dolls” is like the catalog of all things pin-up and assist in the community building of the modern day pin-up enthusiast. Another aspect of this subculture that I had come across are contests, set all over the country, even the world. One specific one is set in Las Vegas during a rock festival, where a pin-up contest is held. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Susiepew (talk • contribs) 22:50, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

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Expand "Male Pin-ups" section, I had not even thought about male pin-ups. I think it would be an interesting section to add to the page, as I think it is part of the pin-up cultural history that is not that well known.

The suggestion for a “Modern Pin-up” would also be interesting or how the iconic styles of the makeup and fashion have circulated back into modern fashion. Perhaps suggesting how burlesque is becoming prevalent and women such as Dita Von Teese have impacted/contributed to the “Modern Pin-up”. Sarahgatti (talk) 21:55, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Edit Response
Thank you! I definitely think that more research needs to be done on the male pin-up, and I will have to do more searching for credible sources that go more in depth on this topic. I also think that the additional information on Dita Von Teese would be beneficial as I have seen her mentioned in the pin-up magazines I had looked into. Her involvement in the field would make this Wikipedia page more credible and up-to-date! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Susiepew (talk • contribs) 00:55, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

Pin-Up in the Contemporary Age
Many people associate pin-up modeling with World War II and the 1950’s, however pin-up has evolved and is a thriving subculture enjoyed by many women to this day. Pin-up can be seen almost anywhere now, even from celebrities and public figures. Like Lana Del Rey, whose style is very comparable to that of the classic pin up model, she even has a song called “Pin Up Galore”. In addition to Lana Del Rey, the legendary Beyoncé has a song labeled “Why Don’t You Love Me” which pays tribute to, the pin-up queen of the 1950’s, Bettie Page. Another public figure and burlesque performer who is constantly referred to as the modern pin up, is Dita Von Teese. Von Teese has even been featured in a biography about Bettie Page, “Bettie Page Reveals All”, where she helps to define pin up. Katy Perry is another celebrity who embodies the ideals of pin-up, and has showcased this in various music videos and outfit choices. Aside from those celebrities, pin up modeling is a cultural subgroup that can be enjoyed by almost anyone. There are many magazines and forums dedicated to this vibrant community. An example of this is the magazine brand labeled, “Delicious Dolls”. “Delicious Dolls” is like the catalog of all things pin-up and assist in the community building of the modern day pin-up enthusiast. The magazine began in 2011 and has both a print and digital version, and in 2015 became “the most-liked” pin up magazine in the world. One of the magazines mission statements, which is important to note, is “...to promote and showcase retro and modern pin up girls.” The magazine does not only support pin-up related events throughout the United States, but also offers anyone to be featured in their magazine as long as they have worked with an approved photographer. Within this subculture there are also many opportunities to perform in pin up contests. One specific one is set in Las Vegas during a rock festival, where a pin-up contest is held. The goal of the contest is “ not one that is based solely on popularity or cosmetic appeal but one that includes inner beauty as well.” They specifically note on the site that they encourage “all shapes and sizes” and that winners will be judged on their bio’s, pastimes, or any work they do outside of their pin-up hobby. They do not perform, but rather they are judged on their authenticity, originality, overall styling presentation, crowd appeal, and stage presence.

Women of Color in Pin Up
Though Marilyn Monroe and Bettie Page are often cited as the classic pin up, there were many women of color who were also super impactful. In the 1920’s two of the most notable African American burlesque dancers was Josephine Baker and Lottie Graves. Despite the little history on Black burlesque dancers, Josephine Baker is a good starting point for evaluating women of color in pin up. Dorothy Dandridge and Eartha Kitt also added to the pin-up style of their time, both by their looks but more notably their fame and personal success. African American pin up saw its biggest influence when the magazine, Jet, was created in 1951. Jet supported pin up as they had a full page feature called, “Beauty of the Week”, where African American women posed in a swimsuit. This was intended to showcase the beauty these women possessed as they lived in a world where their skin color was under constant scrutiny. It was not until 1965 that Jennifer Jackson became the first African American to be published in Playboy as Playmate of the Month. It was not until 1990 that Playboy’s Playmate of the Year became an African American woman, Renee Tennison. Historically, women of color in pin-up are still not as common as their white counterparts. However, the recent revival of pin-up style has propelled many women of color today to create and dabble with the classic pin up look to create their own standards of beauty. In Jim Linderman’s self published book, “Secret History of the Black Pin Up”, he describes the lives and experiences of African American pin up models. Here he outlines the untold story of the African American women involved in pin up.