User talk:SuskoWiki/sandbox

I like your page. It is very informative. I like how you linked some of the terms for the minerals in your page, that is a great way to help non geoscientists to understand the jargon. I feel like the first and second section could be condensed together since the first section is very brief. For the final page you might want to add an original image. More images could possibly help the reader understand the page, like maybe a drawing illustrating the three strata under the geology section. drau1 (talk) 2:00, 7 March 2014(UTC)

Feedback from Matthew Smith
I would have the first intro paragraph above the contents box. First paragraph of “Introduction” section does not have any citations. Maybe push the two pictures on the right down some so that the first picture fits along the words in “Introduction” and the bottom picture fits within the Geology section since you mention geologic waypoints. Maybe have the “Geology” section have subsections within it, such as the mineralogy, tectonics/how it formed, sedimentary features, surface features, etc. Try to have more sections if you can.

--Matthew — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chesschamp82 (talk • contribs) 17:38, 7 March 2014 (UTC)

Graeme Bartlett comments
Your page is quite good. When did Curiosity leave the bay? Is Curiosity really a nickname, or is it a true name? "MSL team" appears without explanation or link but perhaps it is Mars Science Laboratory. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:47, 15 March 2014 (UTC)