User talk:Suzannenuyen/Communication privacy management theory/Rimbaud1230 Peer Review

CCTP752 Peer Review by Yibo Li

Hello, everyone. My name is Yibo Li form CCT program at Georgetown University. I have been assigned to do the peer review of your website and frameworks from you. After reviewing all details in your website, here are some of my thoughts: 1.	There are too many words in this webpage and lack of vivid picture. All pictures used are too old and bored to attract people’s attention. 2.	The structure of this webpage is not that clear for people to read and there is merely no link between different paragraphs. 3.	Not all citation links are working, please double check them again. 4.	Although everything in the article relevant to the article topic, the parts that only have one sentence really distract me. For example, the academic integration part only has once sentence, which is really not professional. 5.	All the examples and experiments are outdated, new and current thoughts and examples are needed.

Here is the link I found that may be helpful: Validate user. (n.d.). Retrieved October 19, 2021, from https://academic.oup.com/jcmc/article/12/2/335/4582963.