User talk:Svody/sandbox

Alex's Peer Review
-- I think its great you hyperlink so much throughout your paragraphs, reflexively connecting what you are writing to other articles on related topics. Most of your citations are from books that are strong sources on the respective subjects you use them as citations for, and I think that only enhances the quality of your piece.

-- In the context of a direct democracy article, I think your piece would benefit from making explicit connections between women's liberation and direct democracy. Precisely how do the two together? Are there any sources that demonstrated the necessity of women's liberation for "true" or authentic direct democracy? In what way does direct democracy---or the principles behind it---require women's liberation, and how is such on display or understood in Rojava since 2012?

-- Do you see Democratic Confederalism as a manifestation or form of direct democracy? If the answer is more complex than a yes or no, I would advise that you highlight what you see as the elements/dimensions of direct democracy within Democratic Confederalism.

-- Your account of Occupy Wall Street is enjoyable to read, and very detailed. There are a number of online sources (from sympathizers and on-the-ground participants) that critique the operations of certain things that went on during OWS, related to this very topic. Using and citing these sources might give the read an even fuller sense of how GA's and facilitation worked in OWS.

-- I am wondering: Where you hope to place these sections within the Direct Democracy article? What intuitions/analyses are guiding your thinking regarding that question? Are there other sections you wish to add besides these two? In what ways do you intend---or not intend---to deep or expand on the existing sections?

Source
Hi! You should be aware that the site Global Research is listed on List of fake news websites and might be an unreliable source. Sjö (talk) 08:04, 22 April 2019 (UTC)