User talk:SwallowInTheTrees/Animal suicide

I feel that the new lead will provide a clearer definition of Animal Suicide and pertains adequately to the subsequent material found in the article. The overall content provides a neutral and well-balanced addition to the article. The additions are well-written in a clear and concise manner. The information is also supported through several peer-reviewed sources. My only critique is that some subsections beneath the Suicidal Behavior section are currently incomplete, and therefore, I cannot provide feedback on your contributions to the article as a whole. I am also having some difficulty viewing the whole picture through connecting the information you are adding to the pre-existing article material (I know that this is to avoid violating the sandbox rules), but I am certain it will all come together in a coherent manner. You are doing a fantastic job, keep up the great work! 😊 Strike2426 (talk) 00:37, 1 November 2021 (UTC)