User talk:Sweet inaara

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Peer Review & Copy Edit Assignment
Hi Inaara, it's Isha. Your draft so far for your article is off to a pretty good start. As for the Lead section, it currently sounds slightly too much like an advertisement for the application/product, so maybe exclude the parts about needing the app or not. Also, maybe take out some words that promote the app, such as "simply."

As for the History section, change 'non-bias' to 'non-biased.' The section is all-together pretty simple and short (considering the company/application is fairly new. I would just make sure to keep the wording so that it does not seem like you are promoting the app (slight word choice changes should suffice).

Overall, I think you are in the right direction, just make sure to find as much verified and true information from academic resources to fill out the page more (especially considering it is a new page). Also, just make sure to watch the wording to ensure that the page does not seem slightly biased toward the application. Isha9 (talk) 07:13, 23 March 2018 (UTC)

Hey Isha,

Thank you so much for your feedback. I'll work on making the lead more unbiased, and make the other changes you recommended. I've been struggling with lengthening the article but will find more sources to do so. Thank you so much! Sweet inaara (talk) 02:29, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

Hey Inaara, it's Isha Ajmera. Your article looks good, there is some bias in your writing so I recommend you work on making your town more neutral. You seem to be doing a good job and I recommend you gather as many sources from different points of view to make sure your work seems unbiased. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Theretiredgymnast (talk • contribs) 06:24, 24 March 2018 (UTC)

Hey Isha, Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm currently working on adding content and sources. Sweet inaara (talk) 02:29, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

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JSFarman (talk) 01:44, 22 April 2018 (UTC)

Feel free to revert my edits to your article!
Hi, I reviewed the ResistBot article and did some editing. I didn't realize it as part of a course, and it was great the way it was. Sorry about that! Revert as you see fit. Thanks, Julie JSFarman (talk) 03:03, 23 April 2018 (UTC)