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I believe the article could use clarification in some areas as well as secondary sources. It would definitely help the article become more reliable

Sofia's Buddhist Cosmology Review
Sofia did a great job locating where the article contains some copyrighted information. Once her changes are published, I think it will definitely help the alert that is currently at the head of the article.

The information and citations Sofia plans to add/edit will help neutralize the article and make it more reliable by properly using secondary sources instead of relying on so many primary sources as it currently stands. Plus, it will bring the article more up to date!

Lastly, all of the citations she plans to add looks great, as the sources look reliable and the links to those sources function as they are supposed to.

Keep up the good work!

Radroni21 (talk) 15:05, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Sofia's Peer Review
All that you wrote about your topic looks good but you can add more to it so people who don't understand or know anything about Buddhism's cosmology will understand it more. I see that you added the citation you intended to add which is good. Other than what i mention before, every other thing looks good

Abigail Osunde (talk) 18:05, 27 October 2018 (UTC)