User talk:Sweisent/sandbox

Hi. In your heading " RDF magazine" are you thinking of dividing the bio into different sections or putting into one heading? The original Wikipedia page has a heading on "Origins" which I would suggest rewording the heading and adding information from your sandbox to there. In the heading "Political Shift" I would suggest adding subheadings since you already have a structured bullet list and if you add these headings, it will make it clearer and coherent.