User talk:Swetzel14/sandbox

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The introduction sets the tone for the rest of the page. It is easy to understand, and clearly states what the social media bubble is. There are a lot of sources to reference. I think those resources could be utilized more when adding to the page.

The structure is clear with sturdy content. Using Mark Cuban's idea first and foremost sets a solid tone that explains what the topic is about and how it started. What is on the page is more about stocks and dollars, with little comments about social media itself. To create balanced coverage, I think it would be great to show how social media has changed with the bubble. There are comments on Myspace and Facebook, but there could be more on how Facebook started a whole trend of social media.

All in all, this page is structured and clear. All it needs is updating and more information; a little TLC should do!

Kboydx23 (talk) 02:33, 23 June 2019 (UTC)