User talk:Sxviix/Internet celebrity

You only needed to have a copy of the original and changed content for the copyediting assignment. At this stage you can delete the copied original content, and just make sure everything you've added is in bold. Also make sure it is clear where in the existing article the sections/sentences are from. You also should focus now on adding more content from peer-reviewed academic sources. You have only added one new source, the other appears to have already been cited in the existing article. This is at its core a research assignment, and so you should focus your energies on identifying what new research you can do to add to this article.Adrishaw (talk) 22:19, 22 March 2021 (UTC)