User talk:SyNick/Eisenhower High School (Yakima, Washington)

This article is much expanded in ways that are pretty great. The biggest problem is that you seem to have stopped sort or right in the middle of writing. There's a sentence that ends midstream and two empty sections on although it was initially estimated "Extracurricular Activities" and "Diversity".

If you clean those things up, I think this is basically good to publish.

Before you do that, you should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from. Many won't apply but some might.

Do a final pass and try to address any of the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then go ahead and make it live with the content that you have that is in good shape. If you can fill in the missing bits first, that would obvious be good. — m a k o ๛  02:43, 14 February 2020 (UTC)

Wifi Problems
Hi Mako! I appreciate your feedback! I believe I'm pretty close to constructing a really awesome final product. Unfortunately, minutes ago I lost a significant amount of progress due to what I believe was a wifi error on my end. I'll make sure this article is complete and looking awesome by the end of tonight. I apologize for not having my finished product for you to look at. SyNick (talk) 03:47, 14 February 2020 (UTC)


 * Two quick things: (1) If you want me to get a message, you should mention me with or leave a message on User talk:Benjamin Mako Hill (my user talk page. (2) You don't need my permission. Based on what you've done, I trust you to clean this up and get it moved over in section tomorrow or whenever. Good luck! — m a k o  ๛  05:17, 14 February 2020 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey Nick! I wrote your peer-review, you're article looks super good but here the link to the peer-review. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SyNick/Eisenhower_High_School_(Yakima,_Washington)/Chuma45_Peer_Review#Sources_and_References Chuma45 (talk) 20:47, 14 February 2020 (UTC)