User talk:SydneyC123/sandbox

Jacobs Peer review
I found your article to be basically perfect. You had a ton of credible sources that directly linked to information in the text. It was well written with a lot of facts told in your own words. I particularly liked how you were so thorough with your overview of the changes to the gambling expansion policies such as talking about the bills previous governors attempted to get passed. Overall other than maybe try to take out some fluff it was amazing.

Heather's Peer Review
Love your article. It's very articulate and contains a lot of information. Honestly, there is not a lot more to add to this. Maybe expand a bit under the lottery section. However, otherwise, your article is very good. Great job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by HR516 (talk • contribs) 16:17, 11 April 2018 (UTC)