User talk:Sydney Stephens/sandbox

Hi! I would take a look at the language you're using to make sure it is neutral in tone. As you have it now there seems to be a negative bias. While I understand the information is sensitive, it's important to try and present it as neutrally as possible. LexiWilkinson25 (talk) 19:24, 2 March 2018 (UTC)

Jeremy Peer Review
I think the information you have is very important to include on wikipedia. I only have one small recommendation and that is to have the word "ether" linked to it's own wiki page. I am not entirely sure how to do so but most wiki pages have words that aren't common language linked to a description to help viewers distinguish the meaning.

Jmjxwc (talk) 21:22, 2 March 2018 (UTC)JMJXWC