User talk:Sydneyoscott/William Dorsey Swann

You have a lot of opportunities to expand on this article; some of the ones you mentioned specifically including Swann's supporters, drag ball involvement, and his criminal history are great points to dig deeper into. I think in discussing these you will be able to give this article the intersectional lense that it needs. I did a quick google scholar search on him and there's an article you may want to check out.

https://www.queermusicheritage.com/DRAG/Sheet%20Music/first%20drag%20queen.pdf

I think your proposed changes will allow this article to expand. I think especially changing things in the lead and including things like William being African-American instead of just American will elevate this article to the next level. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hrgmk4 (talk • contribs) 05:02, 9 March 2022 (UTC)