User talk:Sydthack/sandbox

Peer review

I think the information is good so far. The only thing I would suggest adding subtitles for each section Eddingfieldjack123 (talk) 19:55, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

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It is a good start but i think you need to go more into detail about what is happening because at first i was really confused on what was happening in the article. Make sure your lead is something that is going to make people want to read about your subject. Overall well written, just need to add more information on each subject and i think you will be fine! Bliming99 (talk) 14:03, 24 October 2018 (UTC)