User talk:Sziegler4404

After reading the feedback from my classmate that peer-reviewed my editing and article, I went back to fix my mistakes and correct myself. I enjoyed having good feedback from my classmate because now I know if it sounds good or not. It is also very beneficial for future references and future work that I can prepare myself for. I am going to go back into my article and state clearly where I will be putting my draft. I will also change the draft to a form that will be able to be inserted directly into the article.