User talk:Szuyulee

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Optical computing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Optical_computing

Comments: 1. In the first paragraph, the second sentence does not seem to have strong relation with the first one. Furthermore, mentioning of the larger bandwidth does not provide a clear explanation of why so optical computing would be better than conventional one.

2. The article puts emphasis on the comparison of optical computing with conventional computer. However, I do not know what is the point of doing so. I think the structure of the article should be reorganized and revised, or it would be hard for readers to understand what is optical computing.

Szuyulee (talk) 22:51, 27 October 2016 (UTC)