User talk:T.thomas47

Welcome!
Hello, T.thomas47, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Response
Hi! When looking through the article for ASU Beebe, something you should look for would be as follows:


 * Is there any incorrect information?
 * Anything out of date?
 * Is there anything major that is missing?

I would also look at articles for other universities such as Appalachian School of Law to see what they have. For example, they have a section on employment that the ASU Beebe article lacks. The article on Harvard University, which is a multi-campus university like ASU Beebe, has a section on the campuses that gives more information on each specific university.

With sourcing, you can use primary sources, however it would be good to try to find secondary sources - these can be anything from newspaper coverage to academic and scholarly sources that cover the university. Sourcing like this is also usable when it comes to adding information about the university's national ranking. I hope this all helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:09, 22 October 2019 (UTC)

Response
Hi! Can you give me the link to the source you need added and post it to my talk page? Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:06, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

Citation
Hi! To cite the website you'd use the following content:

It should look like this:

Now I will say that it's important to link to the specific page on the site that you want to use - linking to the main page won't really be super helpful. I did add a source that linked to the page for the main ASU @ Beebe page, but I wasn't sure if there was a more specific link you wanted to use. Also, be careful of writing in a casual tone - there's still some concerning points. I can help you with this if you like.

Also, sorry for the late reply! This week has been a little hectic! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:45, 10 November 2019 (UTC)

Response 11/14
Hi! I did some work on your draft. I moved your notes to the sandbox talk page and also moved some content over from the live article, so it would be easier to see what the article would look like once moved live. I also rephrased some of the content. What I need you to do right now is find sourcing for the content that is unsourced. I've tagged those passages lacking sourcing. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:01, 14 November 2019 (UTC)

Response 11/20
Hi! On my talk page you wrote this:


 * Hey, thanks for helping me, here in order the citations you said are unsourced and need citations: 1st-source 2,2nd-source 2, 3rd-source 2, 4th- source 2, 5th- source 2, 6th- source 1 and 7th-source 1. Also, the paragraph before my actual adding content to the article about why I chose that article, I can't find because my teacher needs to be able to see that in my sandbox for a grade, thanks.

I'm not entirely sure what you meant by the sources - are there sources that weren't linked?

For the one about why you chose the article, you can find it here: Talk:T.thomas47/sandbox. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 10:24, 20 November 2019 (UTC)