User talk:TCRChemistry/Fossil fuels lobby

It could be helpful to include links in the text of your article. Often Wikipedia articles have frequent links to other Wikipedia articles where relevant. For your case perhaps terms like "Lobbyist Act", "assistant deputy minister", "Canadian Association of Petroleum Producers" etc; could use links to help readers find more information on what you're describing.

The sentence "A large portion of CAPP’s membership is made up of oil refineries which harvest oil from the oil sands of Alberta." appears to confuse oil production and refinement. Refineries simply process crude oil, they are not always the same company that produced the crude oil.

You don't need to say "according to jwnenergy.com" if you're adding a citation in superscript right after the sentence.

"Prime Minister" should be capitalized in the phrase "prime minister Stephen Harper"

Just saying "The European Green Deal was the most lobbied topic" seems better than saying #1 most lobbied. Adding #1 is unnecessary.

Again in the UK subsection, you don't need to say "according to The Guardian", we know that from the superscript citation. TheChemistTree (talk) 03:21, 20 April 2021 (UTC)