User talk:TDFergus

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Peer Review - Nicholas Moore
This sentence - The Project often sought after prominent African American leaders to spread knowledge regarding birth control and the perceived positive effects it would have on the African American community, such as poverty and the lack of education[www.plannedparenthood.org "Opposition Claims About Margaret Sanger"] Check |archive-url= value (help). Planned Parenthood. 2004. Archived from the original (PDF) on |archive-url= requires |archive-date= (help). |first1= missing |last1= in Authors list (help) - seems to be missing something/I'm not entirely sure what was meant by it; it seems like this sentence suggests poverty and a lack of education are "perceived positive effects." I also linked a few key people and groups mentioned in this section to their own wikipedia articles. I recommend adding a sentence or two after the final quote in the section on Planned Parenthood and the African American Community to explain the importance of the quote, or show why it is important for it to be in the article.

Nick M-PS489 (talk) 19:43, 9 March 2017 (UTC)